haiku, three takes

fall on city fields
helmets protect slender lives
boys like bobbleheads
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fall on city fields
helmets floating in the dusk
boys like bobbleheads
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on the fields at dusk
white helmets bob over green
football in the fall
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2 comments

  1. me too, neil. i like the middle one.

    and i must say, it’s so refreshing coming back to your blog after a long time away. it’s comfortable here, and beautiful. thanks for making this such an incredible space.

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