I am resisting the urge (a strong one) to punctuate my haiku these days. However, here is my take on this one. As it seems with several of my haiku, the break or period comes toward the end of the second line, after “storm.” Of course, I think, ideally, severals lines in a haiku should almost be able stand on their to add nuances of meaning.
I have read your blog for ages after I stumbled upon it from my brother’s blog. I can feel the stillness coming before I hit the link usually. I’m going to link blog to yours just because I appreciate this fact and want to offer it to my (meager) readers.
I am resisting the urge (a strong one) to punctuate my haiku these days. However, here is my take on this one. As it seems with several of my haiku, the break or period comes toward the end of the second line, after “storm.” Of course, I think, ideally, severals lines in a haiku should almost be able stand on their to add nuances of meaning.
Oh, and I am using “still” as a verb, third person plural. Not sure if this is a standard usage, other than “stilling” wiskey, but this is poetry.
I have read your blog for ages after I stumbled upon it from my brother’s blog. I can feel the stillness coming before I hit the link usually. I’m going to link blog to yours just because I appreciate this fact and want to offer it to my (meager) readers.
Blessings.
Wow, rexqueems, thanks for that generous compliment. I am always glad to hear of a hitherto unknown “long time reader.”
And blessings upon you as well.