A cold Autumn rain

A cold Autumn rain
Soaks truths into the earth. Fall’s
Glories, too, must end.

4 comments

  1. Actually, I am due to write a Winter haiku if I am following the right order, but I could not resist, as it is raining. The last one was rather winterish anyway, so I’ll just consider the order reversed for this last pair.

    Also, I have not been capitalization and punctuation, but felt I need to for this one and rather liked returning to it.

  2. Here is a potential edit, since “Autumn” and “Fall” are both mentioned in the poem:

    A cold, silent rain
    Soaks truths into the earth. Fall’s
    Glories, too, must end.

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