Neil E. Das

haiku

misty rainy day
within its grey folds hidden
possibilities
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misty rainy day
within its soft folds hidden
possibilities

4 comments

  2. Personally, I like ‘soft’ better. it is a little more unusual than ‘grey’ because rainy days are always being described as ‘grey’.
    But ‘grey’ is describing the folds, so i think it still works.
    an excellent haiku for a day like this one.

  3. Thanks, Kirk. Actually, I was a little partial to “soft “too, as it describes the edges of the clouds well also and has other nice connotations. I was a bit attached to to grey, though, simply because I very much like that word when it is spelled with an “e,” being a bit of an Anglophile.

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